A Shot In The Dark
- Marlin Razor

- Mar 21
- 5 min read
“Five. Any update on our target?”
Roxanne’s voice slid through the comms like a blade laid gently against skin—calm, controlled, dangerous only if you forgot what she was capable of.
“Negative, One.” Jerika’s reply came soft, filtered through distance and glass. “Target’s still holding.”
A thousand yards away, the safehouse squatted beneath the night like a bad memory refusing to rot. Once, it had been theirs. A fallback. A place to breathe when missions went loud and the world tried to eat them alive.
Now it belonged to the U.A.R.
Izzy laid prone beside Jay, rifle nestled into her shoulder like a second spine. The tarp over them wore the city’s refuse—leaves, grit, broken things pressed into camouflage. From above, they were nothing. From here, they were judgement waiting for permission.
“Three days,” Jay murmured. “Nobody stays inside forever.”
Izzy didn’t answer.
Her eye moved from window to window, door to door. Light blinked. Curtains shifted. Shadows lied. She catalogued it all with ruthless patience. Not hate. Not anticipation.
Just math.
They didn’t know the man personally. That made it easier. All they needed was who he served.
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The door opened at last.
A silhouette stepped into the spill of broken light. He hesitated. Looked left. Right. Fear moved through him like a bad habit.
“Target mobile,” Jay said. “Gray jeep. Westbound.”
“Copy,” Roxy replied. “Moving.”
The block died all at once—lights guttering, power cut clean. Darkness swallowed the street like a held breath.
Izzy watched Roxanne cross it.
“Signal’s clean,” Jay said, eyes on her tablet. “She’s inside.”
Izzy let herself blink.
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Ten minutes later, the jeep returned.
Jay’s binoculars snapped up.
“One. Target’s back. Three additional hostiles.”
The trunk popped.
A body came out.
Bound. Hooded. Dragged like excess weight.
“They’ve got a hostage.”
Two of the men peeled away, pistols out, crossing the street with intent sharpened by certainty.
“They made you,” Jay warned. “Recommend rear exit.”
“I see them.” Roxy replied. “Too much here. Two—take the shot. Save the hostage.”
Izzy inhaled.
The world narrowed into a circle of glass and breath.
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“Range confirmed.” Jay whispered, voice steady. “One thousand. Laser verified.”
Izzy counted heartbeats instead of responding.
In.
Out.
Still.
Wind teased the city below—trash lifting, drifting, revealing its hand.
“Wind.” Izzy signed.
Jerika watched the mirage through her own glass, eyes flicking between indicators only she could see. “Left to right. Full value. Ten steady, gusting twelve.”
Her mind started doing the math before she finished the thought. Ten miles per hour at a thousand yards wasn’t weather—it was a verdict. She rolled the turret with her thumb, clicks like coffin nails. Elevation first. Ten point six mils. Gravity acknowledged. Argued with. Defeated—temporarily.
“Hold two point four right,” Jay continued. “Gusts push it further.”
Izzy exhaled halfway and stopped. Her reticle floated—patient—a crosshair suspended in a place the target hadn’t reached yet.
Time stretched. At this distance, the bullet wouldn’t arrive for more than a second. Long enough for regret. Long enough for mercy to try and speak.
“Targets are approaching either side of the fence gate.”
“Confirmed.” She could see the silhouettes under the moonlight.
She didn’t aim at the person, she aimed at the gate they were about to open. She imagined the arc, the drop, the wind tugging like hands at the bullet’s coat.
Her finger took up the slack.
“Send when ready.” Jerika said. No pressure. No countdown. Trust, laid bare.
Izzy let the last of her breath leave her lungs and felt the world lock into place.
The rifle recoiled—firm, familiar—steel and force speaking once. The shot cracked the night and was already gone, sprinting downrange faster than sound could chase it.
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Izzy stayed in the scope.
Her target flinched—not from the noise, but from impact. A sharp, impossible jerk, like a puppet with its strings cut mid-motion. They folded, momentum carrying them forward before gravity remembered to claim them. The body hit the concrete hard and did not get back up.
“One-one seconds,” Jay said. “Impact before report.”
The echo rolled back across the city, late and useless. The others turned toward the sound, too slow, too wrong.
Izzy’s heart didn’t race.
It settled. The way it always did after the truth asserted itself.
She cycled the bolt. Another round chambered with quiet finality. The reticle hovered over a second silhouette, calm and steady.
Second shot.
The next man crumpled, hands clawing uselessly at the hole rewriting his future.
The remaining two panicked—hostage shoved back into the trunk, plan collapsing into desperation.
Izzy already saw it. Driver seat. Gas pedal. Escape.
She tracked the empty space where the man would be.
Three.
Two.
One.
Faith over math.
The windshield exploded inward. The bullet found its truth in the driver’s chest. Blood painted the inside of the vehicle before motion died.
The last hostile ran.
Izzy shifted to kneeling. Bolt back. Round in.
Jay fed her numbers. Speed. Angle. Fear.
Crack.
Izzy waited.
The man ragdolled forward, spine screaming but not silenced.
“He’s still moving.” Jerika reported.
Izzy sighed.
One shot. One kill. Clean was a kindness. She felt his pain through distance and discipline. Felt hope drain as blood found the ground.
I’m sorry.
Her final round was chambered.
She aimed higher.
The shot split his spine and ended the argument.
Silence returned.
“Hostiles eliminated,” Jay said through the comms. “Repositioning.”
“Good shooting,” she added. Not praise. Fact.
Izzy nodded once.
She broke the rifle down with practiced care, movements economical, reverent. Somewhere behind her ribs, something heavy settled into place.
Not guilt.
Not pride.
Just gravity.
Satisfied—for now.
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She finished packing last. Jay was already rolling the tarp, Roxy’s signal a soft pulse from the safehouse. The night began to exhale, slow and unaware, as if nothing had happened at all.
Izzy paused with the rifle case in her hands.
Downrange, bodies cooled on concrete. Names that would never matter. Orders that would be replaced by new ones. Somewhere, a report would be filed. Somewhere else, another handler would adjust a strategy and send more men.
The machine would keep turning.
This hadn’t changed the world.
It hadn't even scratched it.
She understood that now.
This wasn’t justice. It wasn’t victory. It was pressure—applied, measured, relentless. One bolt turned. One support weakened. One quiet subtraction from something vast and rotten.
A step.
She thought of the throne—not a chair, not a crown, but a system built from obedience and fear. A thing so big it convinced itself it was untouchable. A structure that believed the distance between it and consequence was infinite.
She knew better.
Izzy closed the case.
Breaking something like that wouldn’t come from a single shot. No matter how perfect. It would come from thousands of moments like this—small, precise, undeniable. Each one teaching the throne the same lesson.
That distance was a lie.
She rose, slinging the case over her shoulder, and followed Jerika into the dark.
The journey was long.
But it had already begun.



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